Hikari,Kitsune

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Name: Hikari,Kitsune

Age:13

Relatives:none,all dead,expect the Kage his father like figure.

[b]Personality:Kitsune is a carefree kid who doesn't have a care in the world.He loves to sleep alot,writing,reading,and hanging out. He smokes(medical cigarettes and somewhat real ones) to help him relax,because he his way past the line of hyperactive.He is smarter than he looks.He is as smart as his generation comes even though he doesn't show it.he loves to fight because it makes him active. he has a knack for getting into trouble, but he doesn't care as long as its fun if it isn't he doesn't care.he uses jutsu very well he even makes D-Rank jutsu look like C-B Rank jutsu.

Appearance:his eye color is as red as blood.his hair color is blue and black.he has headphone on all the time.he also has goggles on his forehead.he wears a black t-shirt under a black hoody jacket with a chain of a skull.he wears blue baggy pants.

History:Born in kirigakure,The water Country,Kitsune had no family or friends he was always treated badly.no one cared about him and no one wanted anything to do with him.but since the kage thought if he grew up totally alone he would rebell against the village so every now again he would send a jonin or chunin to look after him.but Kitsune wanted a real family and friends the ninjas treated him the same way the villagers treated him so,he keeps to himself.

when Kitsune turned 4,after the 3rd ninja war he became even more lonely.but one day a powerful beast came also know as the 8 tailed beast,it distroyed every thing in his path no one could stop it so the ninja decided to seal the beast inside kitsune to save the village from any more damage.at the time the Kage thought that if they seal it inside kitsune that he will grow up being a respected ninja.but instead for three years but he grew up even more alone each day,just like all the other jinchuuriki.so the kage personally looked after him but at a time he didnt care,he sometimes liked being alone by himself.but not before long his heart became dark and cold.Nobody gave him an eye.so he didnt ether.not every one didnt care about kitsune.It was a young genin by the name of Shina who had an eye on him .she wanted to be friends with him.she thought that every one jinchuuriki or not needed a friend.so when she wasn't on missions she would go to his house and she if he wanted to hang out but the first few times he always said that he was busy.but soon he lightened up to her.at least every other day she would come over,he enjoyed it. finally having a friend was cool.one day they was talking about their lives.she asked him how was his life before now.he tells her that it was horribly nobody liked him,they called him a freak,a monster he felt like he wanted to disappear.Shina stayed quiet.he smiled and looked at her and told her that he was the only friend he had.then he tells him that he doesnt get why he isn't accepted.Shina tells him that he was the eight tailed host.but instead of him freaking out he sits there real quiet.then gets up and leaves.without a word.a few days later Shinta walks to Kitsunes house but finds a note saying he wasnt going to be home in a few days.puzzled shina walks away.



one day later kitsune walks into the kage's office and ask's him to allow him to enter the ninja academy.but he refuses.Kitsune then tels him that if he was a ninja he would have a better chance of controling it.so when he put it that way he accepted.the first time in his life kitsune felt happy.and walked out the office.after that he studied jutsu with shina every day until the entry exams Kitsune pass with one of the highest scores in the exams.after that day he attended class every day.he got straight A's and in no time he passed and became a ninja,He sets out to get chosen by a sqaud.

Other:since he is the eight tailed jinchuuriki so he has a lot of chakra and he is really hard headed and unstable.

strength & Weaknesses

strength- since he has an overflow of chakra he can use it to pull off more jutsu than a adverage ninja could,which makes him stronger and faster than most.

strength-adaptable to any situation and could easly make counter measures to turn the favor.

weakness-he's to laid back which allows the opponent to get the upper hand sometimes.

weakness-since he has so much energy he takes out visable enemies,but forgets hidden ones.This could spell trouble if he and his teammates are down and hes hurt.

weakness:he is to active so if he relaxes to much on a mission he falls into a deep sleep.two days to five weeks long.

[/i]Ninja Data

Rank:Genin

Position:

Village:kirigakure water country

Chakra Nature: fire

Equipment

kunai x5
Paper bombs x2



Jutsus

Basic academy Techniques:
clone jutsu
creates clones of themselves to assist in battle
Rank:D

escape jutsu
creates a fake clone from something like a barrel of hay to an animal.
Rank:D


Ninjutsu
Fire style:eternal flame
the user spits out molten lava from the mouth.the more chakra the user puts into the jutsu the stronger.
Rank:C

Role playing sample

One day on a warm summer day.kitsune is running through the village.Kitsune seemed to be running from something.huff,huff,huff i lost her.Kitsune says.while walking away he sees a familiar face walk in front of him.Where do you think your going? the girl says.Uhh come on Shinata let me take a break Please?Kitsune says.Nope yo agreed to train with me and thats what we're doing. Shinata says.Running 80 laps around the village!Thats your normal day of training not mine! so let me go! Kitsune says while yelling.Okay then whats your normal day of training?Shinata says.first i start by getting away from you!Escape jutsu!Kitsune says while disappearing.Hey Kitsune get back here!she says while running after him.

wait a tick, so you have a really powerful clan and you are a bijuu. Sorry, but I have to refuse this one.

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I don't notice any change to be honest.

Also, I will not allow a jinchuuriki and a clan to be on one character. So you will not get it passed unless you get rid of one of them

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I still don't see any changes. Your bio still has both.

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Firstly what made you kitsune so special from any other child at the time, there must have been a reason that they chose to seal the hachibi within him and not anyone else, i would think that they would maybe try to find someone with a promising background of his/ her familly being great ninja.

what do you mean by his had no family, like was he under the watch of a jounin maybe who was set to make sure he grew up able to stablise the hachibi's power or something, someone must have looked after him as he was still a baby, right?

ha ha i edited

If you look at the character template, Rp sample has been added very recently to help us decide if user can have have better ranks, so please add it, try and keep the same quality as your rp sample or better when you rp.

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You might want to use something like MS Word to be checking you spelling and punctuation because i found quite a few mistakes in that paragraph. Besides that i think it's alright so...
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